Competitive Guide: Dunsereph

[poweroftibarn]

A few things: I like your guide for the most part, it does a good job of showcasing Dunseraph's versatility, however, I feel that there are a few errors that require addressing. Firstly, as others have mentioned, Sky Fall is a special move, it has no place on a physical set and should be incorporated into your special set instead. Secondly, I feel like your Cloud Nine set is rather redundant, having both Cloud Nine and Sunny Day/Rain Dance on the same set is pretty much pointless since you already have Cloud Nine to nullify weather effects. If you're going to keep the set in the analysis, some changes are appropriate (as well as a notice that Cloud Nine is currently unobtainable on Dunseraph atm). Thirdly, I'm pretty sure that Dunseraph can learn Dragon Dance from move tutors, and well Dunseraph isn't the best Dragon Dance sweeper in the world, it does have one thing that the best two DD sweepers at the moment (Fafninter and Tracton) lack: recovery (in the form of Roost). If you're going out of your way to mention a Cloud Nine set, you might as well mention a DD set as well. Finally, you don't have to do this if you don't want to, bit I think you should change the names of your sets to make their purpose more self-explanatory. Change "Can't Touch This Dragon God~" to "Calm Mind," "Wrath of the Gods" to "Coil," etc.

Despite my criticisms, I'm happy with this analysis. We need more of these if we want competitive Uranium to go anywhere. I would like to see Vilucard or Dramsama for your next analysis, the other mons you listed have already gotten plenty of attention.