02-26-2017, 09:51 AM
(This post was last modified: 02-26-2017, 10:02 AM by AgentParadox.)
It's mostly okay, though on the 7th line, "rectors" needs correcting to "reactors" and when you write "it's" as in belonging to something ("its tail" etc.) it shouldn't have an apostrophe. "you too" as in "you as well" needs two O's, not one. Also, "enterance" should be "entrance".
