[Guide] Competitive Analysis: Laissure

[Lord Windos]

Your analysis does a good job in capturing Laissure's versatility... a little too well, in fact.  Your sets could use a bit of direction, less options in terms of EV spreads and movesets would be ideal.  Some of your sets have 7-8 options for moves, which is way too much.  I'd say 3-4 should be the max, and even then, that's not something you wanna see on every set.  Additionally, I'd do away with the "pure bulk" set, it's kind of redundant when you have the RestTalk set.  Also, I'd separate the the Wall Breaker set into two different sets: one with Choice Band and one with Life Orb.  The Choice Band Set should feature exclusive attacking moves, and an EV spread of 252 hp / 252 atk.  The Life Orb set could potentially run some Speed EVs as well as have Swords Dance as an option.  Finally, you don't have natures on any of your spreads.  Adamant, Impish, and Careful should do the trick most of the time, with Jolly for the Choice Scarf set.

A good job, but as power side, maybe trim down the guide a little, since all those option doesn't really give the picture of a definitive 'set'. It also seem to me that you are a bit too concise with the descriptions. Couldn't hurt to go into a little more detail about the sets themselves, the ideas behind them, or why the moves are even in the set in the first place. Not a bad guide, but it could using some editing.

I'm in the process of trimming it down a little currently.  Will further clarify on some of the purposes as well.

First edit on the post is done.  Any further suggestions would still help, of course.

Much better. Detailed explanation on what each moveset is trying to accomplish, and there is not so many alternative moves being listed as well. It also looks a lot more professional and clean, so to speak. Great job! I might chip more to say later, but you guide is pretty self-explanatory at the moment!