06-10-2017, 09:42 AM
(06-10-2017, 01:04 AM)Lord Windos Wrote: I need to get some sleep myself, and I am very interested in what Phantom, Nylon, and Iron have to say about what came to be!
Oh, are you asking for my thoughts on this? Hmm... Let's see..
... I really enjoy the story. The fact that Ven was choosen to take part in the project because of his knowledge and empathy give it a natural feeling instead of being a plot-thing, and you did good to describe its agressive behaviour at first. Only a natural reaction when being captured by humans. The part reaching through it by a simple hug and becoming a close friend of it before the other the CO decided that's not actually what they wanted quite much reminds me on Lucille and Urayne.
In-game, you gave Shiva quite a thing to mull over. She never believed that the Lore of Mythological Pokemon can become so true - that gave her own interest in those a nice boost. Shaymin...
"Anything can be art. Anything can be self-expression. Now take your weapon and run with it" [Gerard Way]
--Windos is my OTP ❤---
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--Windos is my OTP ❤---
`❤★`°・:*:・。
。・:*:・゚’★❤`


