[Meta thread] Iron's PokeRole Adventure: The Skull Ruins

[Spiritmon]

Well? Any thoughs guys? Too long the story or to much tireful the story posts? What to hear opinions.

I'm in the middle of typing to react to that BEAUTIFUL scenery and tree, but from overflying your stuff it saddens me - tragedy is something I can't cope well with, but it's certainly well-written and thought out.

Its because tragedy its something who exist in our world. When I make a character I try to create a deep story, mix with both sadness and happiness. And sometimes, a reflection of things who exist and is true in the world. 

Now, I not saying my family receive such tragedy as depicted by Heart. But there is people out there who somtimes suffer that kind of thing. Or even worse. Heart is the symbol of something more: Not a hero or choosen one, but a human person. Something and someone who pass though tragedy. Evil and good. Happiness and sadness. A true complex and the same time simple character.

In other words: A human. Like any person in real life.