05-15-2018, 02:32 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-15-2018, 02:36 PM by AgentParadox.)
A few things:
1. In the intro dialogue for Rocket, the "now to tell me your name" should end with a comma. Just minor. Also make sure to replace every instance of "Pokemon" with "Pokémon".
2. If you're wanting to create some Fakémon, Dragonfly Cave has some top tips for beginners.
3. I'm enjoying the progress you have made so far. Good work!
1. In the intro dialogue for Rocket, the "now to tell me your name" should end with a comma. Just minor. Also make sure to replace every instance of "Pokemon" with "Pokémon".
2. If you're wanting to create some Fakémon, Dragonfly Cave has some top tips for beginners.
3. I'm enjoying the progress you have made so far. Good work!
