[Meta thread] Lord Windos' PokeRole Adventure : Celadon City Vandels

[Lord Windos]

Hmmmm...well, tbh, the the use of 'not' in that phrasing was what lead me to interpret it that way.  And while I did raise an eyebrow at first, I figured it could be justifiable, so I tried to think of a way it could be and work that in.

She IS speaking her mind, though, so my interpretation might not be entirely accurate to that.  I could suggest rephrasing it without the use of 'not' to make that a little clearer, though.  Her main reason does kinda cover all three other categories as well, and that could be used in the reasoning to make it a bit clearer.  'Cuz if there's even one major screwup, then they likely both get caught (and probably punished severely for repeat offenses) and the entire plan goes to pot.

And as far as editing my own post goes, it wouldn't be too difficult for me to accomodate for that change/clarification, either.

Alrighty, I'll rephrase/change that portion of the dialogue to be more clear/less misleading , as I don't like it when I do a shoddy enough job of story telling that the player gets the wrong idea entirely of what's happening!

Not right now, though. Its early in the morning for me, and I need to head off to bed now, before it gets any earlier! See you then!