[Meta thread] Iron's PokeRole Adventure: The Skull Ruins

[PhantomUnderYourDesk]

Whoosh, took me a while, but I finally done the post. I decided to have a little more and give some extra emotion in Heart artifact bonding. Since now the campaigh is more focus in narrative instead of battle, why not give a try and let my imagination run wild.

Dont know if it was a good post, but I would like to listen some thoughts about the last post. Was good? Bad? Way to long? I open to critics.

It's not too long, but as a suggestion try to highlight phrases and words and/or add pictures, since long blank walls of text can be discouraging to read.