[Meta Thread] Dragonstrike's Pokerole Test Game: Mount Coronet Mystery

[Dragonstrike]

So, now that I've introduced my four major elements for my test game (Space-Time Distortion, Mystery Dungeons, Primal Pokemon, and Shadow Pokemon), what do you guys think of the story I've been weaving so far?  

I know we had a really long period where nothing was really happening, but now that we're getting into the meat of the plot, I'd like to hear your thoughts.