02-05-2020, 11:46 AM
(This post was last modified: 02-05-2020, 11:48 AM by Dragonstrike.)
(02-05-2020, 11:39 AM)Lord Windos Wrote:(02-05-2020, 04:00 AM)Dragonstrike Wrote: Oh dear Arceus. I'm gonna need some time to figure out how the hell Karen and her pokemon are going to react to that, and the consequences thereof...
If you wish, I can greatly simplfy the rant to just 4 sentances, and then have him just tell her to mind her own business. Now that I've slept on it, I do believe that Ran's reaction is a wee bit too voilite, even by my standards. He has reason to explode at her then (After a frantic battle, just had a conversation about a topic that annoyed him, said topic brought up bad memories, she pushed one of his big buttoms, etc..) , but given that she recenlty proved herself a nice and lovely person and appeared to express geniune concern for Ran...that SHOULD have tempered his reaction.
Well, I can edit things if ya wish. I just finished the post, but I'm more than happy to edit it if you edit yours.
Edit: I've deleted my post in the meantime. Let me know what your decision is, and I'll repost as appropriate.
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