[Walkthrough] The Kangustlocke Z!!!

[Nekra]

Yes, I see you trained your pokemons to level 10 before first gym. But I did not see the rule against overleveling in this kangustlocke.

About crashing during evolutions: You can save (and backup) your game when pokemon's exp. meter is going full to prevent losing a progress when game crashes during an evolution.

I agree, the man is f*** stalker.

Damn cats forcing to sleep. They have not a lot of solutions in early games (vital spirit, natural cure), but Nuzlock depends a lot on luck what you meet first in each location.

It was dangerous, fortunately all your pokes survived.

I am not sure, is it irony about piece of cake? Flying types has advantage over bug types.

At the end of chapter, I think your team looks good. (6 members, levels 10-14, evolved Stuart)
After your previous post, I see something similar betweeen Rattata and Kinetmunk - body pose. I never joined Rattata with Chyinmunk, they are drawn standing on different number of legs (Rattata 4, Chyinmunk 2).

Does chapter 2 contains two player's days? (You wrote "hour is over", mentioned periods 40 and 30 minutes are together longer than an hour.)

About abilities:
I agree, Arena trap is better than Sand veil.
Natural cure- why meh? Is it so worse in Nuzlock than in normal game? (It is slow, but to cure it by switching may help, when temporary all party members have status problem.)

I agree with your good/ok about other abilities.